My mom calls me to pick up my brother after school. It’s an easy task, I tell her, no way I’ll forget about it. Three hours, I see 10 missing calls from my mom. My brother is missing, and the teachers do not know where he is! I suddenly remember his favorite place which is the park near the gas station. Until today, I was always forgetful. I didn’t think about how my actions impacted others. Now I do. I do not want to lose my brother again!
Sandra James
11/6/2021 10:15:21 am
You conveyed his fear very well - I could feel my heart beating!
Jennifer Duncan
11/6/2021 10:47:11 pm
Scary moment, for sure. Well done.
Sue Clayton
12/6/2021 05:51:16 am
A lesson well learnt, Seah.
Fliss Zakaszewska
12/6/2021 04:01:08 pm
A 'something' that is never forgotten - but it had a happy ending. Nicely written. Comments are closed.
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