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The Run, by Marjan Sierhuis

20/2/2021

 
SPORT
The morning sun shines brightly on the water. It shimmers like millions of diamonds.

A flock of grey and white seagulls scream while they perform acrobatics in the sky.

Her powerful leg muscles pump like crazy while she runs down the sandy beach.

Her auburn-colored ponytail swings back and forth.

Sweat trickles down her face and exudes from her pores.

A gentle breeze off the water cools her warm cheeks.

Her pink lips curve into a smile.

Nothing like a morning run to blow away the cobwebs.

Pamela Kennedy
20/2/2021 06:19:48 pm

Well done, Marjan. I can see her running along the shoreline and am glad that I don't have to keep up with her.

Marjan sierhuis
20/2/2021 06:37:12 pm

Thank you, Pamela.

Jim link
20/2/2021 06:57:53 pm

Wonderfully descriptive, Marjan - how I do miss running along a sandy beach. (Our beaches here on the island are rocky - so now I run along the bluff looking down at the water.) Funny how she gets that smile - I always dread the run, but am always glad that I did it - it truly blows away the cobwebs.
Nice
Jim

Marjan sierhuis
20/2/2021 08:12:21 pm

Thank you, Jim for reading and sharing. It is nice to be out in the fresh air no matter where you are.

Sandra James
20/2/2021 09:47:38 pm

For me it's a slower pace but my morning walk does have a similar effect, and a great time to think up new story ideas :)

marjan sierhuis
20/2/2021 10:25:43 pm

Keep sharing those wonderful stories with us Sandra.

Sue Clayton
21/2/2021 01:01:05 am

An early morning run just after sunrise is the closest thing to heaven, Marjan. Unfortunately a lie-in can be just as heavenly.

Marjan sierhuis
21/2/2021 04:25:50 pm

So true. Thank you, Sue for reading.

Krystyna
21/2/2021 06:49:40 pm

Beautiful imagery in an uplifting story, Marjan

Marjan sierhuis
21/2/2021 07:38:45 pm

Thank you, Krystyna for your kind words.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:51:27 pm

I feel the sun and the cool breeze. Wonderful description.

Marjan sierhuis
21/2/2021 11:37:05 pm

Thank you, Rita for taking the time to read and for your kind words.

Padmini Krishnan
22/2/2021 10:56:00 am

Beautiful and poetic. Nothing like a brisk run to get away from stress.

Marjan sierhuis
22/2/2021 02:57:49 pm

Thank you, Padmini for your kind words.

Mary Wallace
23/2/2021 05:28:58 am

Beautiful piece Marjan. Sadly my running days are behind me, but I feel like I accompanied you on yours. It felt great.

Marjan sierhuis
23/2/2021 11:01:58 am

Thank you, Mary for your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed my story.


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