The truck slowed down, ending his reverie. He felt his colleagues’ excitement as they prepared to disembark. He felt numb and listless. How would he face his wife, Maria, knowing that his heart was gone forever to a dead rebel soldier?
Tired and wistful soldiers in the truck shifted uncomfortably. Batira saw the passing landscape. “Oh, the beauties of home,” he thought. Then his mind moved to Semira, the girl soldier he’d met. He recalled her softness. Shutting his eyes, he tried to block the memory. Semira broke the rules. She loved the enemy and that love ended her life.
The truck slowed down, ending his reverie. He felt his colleagues’ excitement as they prepared to disembark. He felt numb and listless. How would he face his wife, Maria, knowing that his heart was gone forever to a dead rebel soldier?
Bobby Warner
22/12/2015 06:42:12 pm
This is short but has an incredibly LARGE impact!
Gordon Lawrie
24/12/2015 05:13:54 pm
This was the winner of the FFF Christmas Competition for 2015.
Alison Mcharg
24/12/2015 08:16:10 pm
A standout bittersweet tale of love and loss, perfectly hitting the mark of the FFF Christmas competition. Well done Joy, I loved it.
Nkanu Egbe
28/12/2015 09:59:07 pm
I am enthralled. Well done!
Joy Ege-Essien
29/12/2015 06:52:37 pm
When the world can move beyond war, politics and greed then it will fall into a true union that will outlast us all. Comments are closed.
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