SIDERIUS CLASSIC 100-WORD
COMPETITION, 2024
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WINNER SIDERIUS CLASSIC 100-WORD COMPETITION, 2024 "You don't know me," she said. I guess I didn't. I never really had, of course. Children are torn from your body, their thoughts their own. "No, I don't," I said, my back pressed against the bathroom door. On the other side, she stifled a sob, and my heart broke. "Oh, honey..." I said, slipping my fingers under the door, just the tips on the other side. She sniffled. Then I felt the soft pressure of her small warm fingers on mine. We sat there, back to back, fingers to fingers, until I heard the soft click of the lock.
Paul A. Freeman
7/4/2024 02:05:03 am
A touching story.
Jennifer Duncan
7/4/2024 08:37:43 pm
You captured so eloquently the pain in our hearts when our children are hurting and we don't know how to help. Being there is always a good start.
Cara Dickens
8/4/2024 01:50:45 pm
A lovely story, so understated yet so powerful. A worthy winner.
Paritosh Chandra Dugar
11/4/2024 06:26:46 pm
CONGRATULATIONS!
Louise
14/5/2024 07:53:03 am
Heartfelt. A lovely compassionate piece. Comments are closed.
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