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Breaking Point, by Mary Wallace

24/9/2021

 
Mark stood before the bathroom cabinet, anxiety clawing at his insides. Fear and inadequacy overwhelmed him. He couldn't think; hadn't written in weeks until today.

Today, he'd grabbed the pen and poured out his soul. The email rejection was immediate. His writing was not good enough; his pain was deemed not poetic enough.

He craved the pain medication. Even drug free, Mark still needed the reassurance of its presence. As his hand strayed towards the pills it found his phone instead.

"Lifeline, how can I help you", the voice was calm, reassuring. Mark took a deep, steadying breath.
Jim link
24/9/2021 06:07:13 pm

Haven't heard from you in a while - well worth the wait.
Nicely done
Jim

Diane Chattaway link
24/9/2021 08:00:24 pm

You captured this feeling perfectly.
I loved reading your work!

Jennifer Duncan
24/9/2021 08:56:05 pm

Sometimes a human voice is what we need. Well written.

Sandra James
24/9/2021 08:58:07 pm

Well done, Mary :)

Sue Clayton
25/9/2021 02:59:42 am

Sometimes a rejection is just what we need to motivate ourselves back into living our lives regardless of whether it's writing or other circumstances. Well said, Mary. Lifeline plays a huge part in bringing people back from the brink.

Krystyna
25/9/2021 05:19:53 am

A reminder to all of us how important a “lifeline” is to our wellbeing, no matter how tough life circumstances get. A great read, Mary.

Padmini
25/9/2021 10:39:35 am

Every writer goes through rejection, I suppose. Some more than the others. Good that Mark decided to call the lifeline. Glad to see you back after a long time, Mary.

Mary Wallace
25/9/2021 01:05:13 pm

Thankyou for your lovely comments. I'm struggling with my physical and mental health at the moment so I have been taking a little break. It's a day by day thing. I'll write when I'm able. Lovely to feel your support.

Padmini
25/9/2021 03:35:04 pm

Take care, Mary. Best wishes and prayers with you.

Kim Favors
25/9/2021 09:58:09 pm

Sending you a hug.

Krystyna
26/9/2021 10:29:40 pm

Wishing you the best in your recovery, Mary.

Marjan Sierhuis
25/9/2021 01:47:47 pm

Best wishes, Mary on a recovery. ❤ Take it one day at a time. A hug from.me.

Marjan

Bill Sells
26/9/2021 12:21:38 pm

Oh so very good to read your words, Mary. You tell wonderful stories.


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