Do You Know Your Neighbour? by Yola M. Caecenary

6/11/2020

It is a question that has struck me lately. Do I know my neighbour? I only know the person as he; when he opens his door, he opens it as if he were at war; based on the running water I hear, he takes a shower before midnight twice to three times a week; not a night owl as I can hear his snores while my mind and heart still talking to each other way postmidnight; I hear some farts at several nights that make me wonder how thin our wall is.

Today, two police lines are blocking his doors.

Susan F. Reid

6/11/2020 10:35:10 am

I really like your use of ambiguity. Did someone he was "at war" with shoot him? Were the farts gunshots?

Yola Caecenary link

6/11/2020 02:52:09 pm

Hi, Susan! Thank you for reading. Also for the questions of possibilities that what might happen. Those enriched the story because none of those was the premise.

Marjan sierhuis

6/11/2020 12:18:56 pm

Nicely done, Yola. I am intrigued. Perhaps a follow up is waiting to be told?

Yola Caecenary link

6/11/2020 02:57:45 pm

Thank you, Marjan, for reading it.
I don't know... I might make the sequel for this. 🙂 Thanks again for your nice thought.

Pamela Kennedy

6/11/2020 12:41:27 pm

In this case, Yola, maybe ignorance was bliss..well done!

Yola Caecenary link

6/11/2020 03:00:04 pm

Thank you, Pamela, for reading it!

Sue Clayton

7/11/2020 06:18:38 am

Too much nighttime noise, not enough sleep, I believe he/she killed him, Yola. Perhaps the smell of the farts filtering through the thin wall was the last straw.

Yola Caecenary link

15/11/2020 01:34:53 pm

Hi, Sue.
Thank you so much for reading it! 😀

Mary Wallace

9/11/2020 04:37:49 am

Tell us more. I don't think we ever know another person really well.

Yola Caecenary link

15/11/2020 01:46:10 pm

Hi, Mary!
Couldn't agree more...

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