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Empathy, by Logan Malone

18/9/2020

 
An underdeveloped butterfly flailed on my porch mat. With only two legs and brown, shriveled wings, it would not last long.

I took it with me to look for a box. Rolling it onto a paper towel, it rested while I did some research.


Supposedly, males like cherries, and that’s what I had. I peeled away the skin to remove the pesticides before offering the red flesh.


It thrashed away from the fruit.


I remembered an overripe banana in the compost bin. I retrieved it and held out a chunk of juicy mush.


She stilled and began to sip.
Don Tassone link
18/9/2020 11:00:22 pm

What a beautiful portrait of empathy -- and kindness too, I might add. Well done, Logan!

Sue Clayton
19/9/2020 02:21:01 am

I agree with Don. This was a beautiful story of caring and kindness.

phyllis souza
20/9/2020 09:38:04 pm

"She stilled and began to sip." What a lovely picture. Well done.

Teddy Kimathi
21/9/2020 08:16:32 am

Hi Logan. I really enjoyed your story.

Logan Malone
22/9/2020 04:34:51 pm

Thank you all for the supportive comments! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I think we are all capable of empathizing with the "it"s out there.


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