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Hephzibah, by Barry O'Farrell

25/9/2020

 
Hephzibah is not a friendly cat. She can’t be picked up.

Should anyone dare pick her up expect howls of protest, snarling, spitting and clawing the air as if possessed.

Returned to the floor she runs to one of her safe spots where she sits glowering.

Hephzibah will allow Beth to stroke her but only occasionally.

Suddenly, quietly, affectionate behaviour!

With a paw on each side of Beth’s abdomen, Hephzibah rests her head on Beth’s belly to lie contentedly for an hour or more. This new behaviour could be the first sign.

Pregnancy test kit added to Beth’s shopping list.
Sandra James
25/9/2020 09:50:17 am

Nice story, Barry. I've heard that cats do this sometimes with pregnant women and, sadly, when they know someone is dying :(

Barry O'Farrell
26/9/2020 12:35:32 am

Glad you liked it.
Thank you very much.

Sue Clayton
26/9/2020 03:25:08 am

I loved this little cat tale. Great description of a cat I once had; affection all one-sided.

Barry O'Farrell
27/9/2020 01:10:25 am

Thank you for your comments. Trust the memories were pleasant.

Candace A. Williams
27/9/2020 06:48:14 pm

What a sensitive portrayal of an enigmatic cat. Thought I was a dog person until now.

Barry O'Farrell
27/9/2020 11:23:01 pm

Hope I haven't changed you! Thank you for your comment.

Maureen Hansen
28/9/2020 02:12:22 am

My grandson and I read your story this morning. He found it suspenseful and cute. It was well-structured and kept his interest throughout.

Barry O'Farrell
28/9/2020 02:41:31 am

Glad you both liked it. Thank you for your feedback.


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