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Humbly, She Sold Pie, by Krystyna Fedosejevs

16/10/2020

 
While Mildred’s fate was being deliberated, Valerie packed her van.

“What happened?” she asked, seeing her dad return home.

“Guilty.”

“Dear friend, wasn’t she?” Valerie asked.

“Still is.”

Outside LuckyGoLucky grocers, a young woman was picked up by Kenneth, her friend. He drove her to a lawyer’s office where she would challenge her late mother’s will. A brother being the sole beneficiary of the estate.

Valerie’s dad loaded the last pies destined for sale.

Someday he would tell her. That the woman he married and divorced was not her biological mother. That her likeness was to his true love, Mildred.

Swapan k Banerjee
16/10/2020 11:03:28 am

Mildred series is fascinating. Hope it'll continue, Krystyna

Krystyna
16/10/2020 03:08:44 pm

Thank you Swapan for the “fascinating” comment. The Mildred saga continues off-site with cameo appearances on site if readership is willing to endure. Be forewarned, the storyline may experience hiccups when vultures descend in the form of new topics.

Paritosh Chandra Dugar
16/10/2020 07:47:31 pm

Sometimes, Mildred may behave like Mildgreen. A cute story, Krystyna.

Mary Wallace
16/10/2020 10:57:48 pm

Happy to hear more of Mildred; she's building up quite a history. It's a shame she's been found guilty before her daughter knows her.

Krystyna
17/10/2020 12:18:57 am

Yes, I agree, Paritosh. Thank you for the compliment.
Ah, Mary, perhaps the daughter will know her mother, as the plot twists and turns. Glad you are happy to read more of Mildred.

Sue Clayton
17/10/2020 03:25:02 am

Calling for an encore too, Krystyna. Fascinating stuff.

Krystyna
17/10/2020 02:27:22 pm

Thank you, Sue. Will do.

David
18/10/2020 03:43:58 pm

Nice idea to serialise a story through 100 word pieces. Maybe it's an idea that will catch on. Keep us coming back for more.

Editor
19/10/2020 10:38:12 am

Just to be clear, David, each 100-word story must be free-standing and not require reference to any other. Writers can use the same characters multiple times, and even sequence their stories, but a 300-word story divided into three equal instalments is a 300-word story, not three 100-word ones.

Krystyna
18/10/2020 06:14:23 pm

Thank you, David, for the nice comment. No harm in trying, that is a story in 100-word units.

Krystyna
19/10/2020 04:34:08 pm

True, Editor. Thank you for clarifying.
Yes, I have presented the story in three episodes, but each episode can also stand on its own as a story.
This experience has given me the idea to continue my Mildred storyline elsewhere in a longer format.


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