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Just in Time, by Sandra James

27/11/2020

 
His eyes held mine, as they had all those years ago. My heart fluttered.

My divorce was final; I was free. Perhaps now my teenage crush would be requited. Our time at last.

The years had been kind to him. I hoped his smile was saying he thought the same about me.

I continued to gaze, lost in the depths of crystal pools… until a surreptitious movement distracted me.

A glint of sunlight on gold as he slipped something into his pocket.

The dent on his third finger almost as deep as the dent in my dreams.
Sue Clayton
27/11/2020 08:29:37 am

Free from marital chains; free from a teenage crush. I could hear her deep sigh, Sandra. But now she can dream of a life free from wedding rings.

Sandra James
30/11/2020 09:54:09 pm

She almost went from frying pan into the fire but, yes, unfettered now... perhaps she'll be smart and join a writing group filled with dependable people :)

Swapan k Banerjee
27/11/2020 09:43:07 am

Very creative of you to choose this title. Very exact.

Sandra James
30/11/2020 09:55:36 pm

Thank you, Swapan! I sometimes have trouble thinking of titles but this one felt right :)

David
27/11/2020 10:17:50 am

Perfectly done, Sandra.

Sandra James
30/11/2020 09:56:18 pm

Thank you, David - much appreciated :)

Pamela Kennedy
27/11/2020 12:48:34 pm

Such a bittersweet story...perfect title...well done, Sandra.

Sandra James
30/11/2020 09:57:46 pm

Thanks, Pamela! Sometimes the ones that got away get better and better in our memories, especially when other troubles come along but usually there's a reason they 'got away'. :)

Sivan Pillai
27/11/2020 01:32:36 pm

Thank God you were saved 'just in time'! Beautiful story, Sandra.

Sandra James
1/12/2020 01:27:25 am

Thank you, Sivan. How easy it would be during a low patch to fall victim! Yes, saved just in time by that glint of gold :)

Don Tassone link
27/11/2020 01:50:02 pm

What a story, especially with its killer last line. Well done, Sandra.

Sandra James
1/12/2020 04:32:56 am

Thank you, Don! I'm glad you like it and really appreciate the feedback.

Peggy Gerber
27/11/2020 07:02:37 pm

A love that was not meant to be. Lovely story.

Sandra James
1/12/2020 04:40:15 am

Thanks, Peggy. Very glad the sun was shining on her and, hopefully, she'll find someone nice :)

Bobby Warner
27/11/2020 10:38:20 pm

An old love best not revisited!

Sandra James
1/12/2020 04:43:03 am

Yes, Bobby! It's easy to forget the negative side of those old loves but she had a lucky escape. Thank you:)

Mary Wallace
27/11/2020 11:19:33 pm

How quickly we search to make the same mistake. Good story Sandra.

Sandra James
1/12/2020 04:44:20 am

Yes, Mary, let's hope she's learnt her lesson :)

Maria
30/11/2020 06:59:07 pm

Bravo! Great story.

Sandra James
1/12/2020 04:45:01 am

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Maria! I really appreciate it :)

Andrew Carter
5/12/2020 11:45:03 am

A poignant story, Sandra, and a powerful ending.


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