The DJ lets the song play on repeat, the same one we played when we danced in our dorm room and Lainey sways and remembers, turning to touch me, to smile and even with chips in her teeth, she is perfect.
Lainey wears purple—the fabric swirls as she spreads her wings. Not majestic like an eagle, but bright and chirpy like a sparrow. Her spins make me dizzy, and she twists and gyrates, the thin gauze of her dress floating in my vision. Everyone stares, everyone except my husband who watches me watching her.
The DJ lets the song play on repeat, the same one we played when we danced in our dorm room and Lainey sways and remembers, turning to touch me, to smile and even with chips in her teeth, she is perfect.
Sue Clayton
26/2/2022 02:08:30 am
A teenage romance captured in a purple haze of remembrance.
Finnian Burnett
26/2/2022 12:27:05 pm
Yes, exactly!
Sarah
26/2/2022 06:56:46 am
Lovely
Mary Anne Mc Enery
26/2/2022 11:58:07 am
Nostalgic and poignant…………… you reveal so much about your character’s personality with your word choice. Stylish writing, Thank you.
Finnian Burnett
26/2/2022 12:26:37 pm
Thank you so much!
Pamela Kennedy
26/2/2022 04:35:41 pm
Made me smile... 20/3/2022 05:51:47 pm
Oh, I love this. The remembered "young love", the potential longing that still exists. There's layers to this. Beautifully written! Comments are closed.
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