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Maybe Tomorrow, by Alyce Clark

26/1/2024

 
It’s difficult, looking into the eyes that recognized me yesterday, but not today.

Having the hand, that so gently, lovingly, held mine 24 hours ago, suddenly pull away at my touch.

Biting my lip, I manage to suppress the tears and try speaking softly.

Her face goes blank. The bright eyes that gazed upon me so tenderly and with such pride my whole life, have grown dim.

She begins to utter nonsensical words.

“Love you, Gran,” I whisper, flashing my warmest smile.

“Maybe tomorrow,” I say to myself as I rise and kiss her cheek. “Maybe she’ll recognize me tomorrow.”

Paul Freeman
26/1/2024 03:14:11 pm

Alas, that's how it sometimes goes.

Sue Clayton
27/1/2024 04:14:56 am

Always remember the love that shone bright before the light dimmed.

Christa Loughrey
27/1/2024 10:01:15 am

Dementia is a terrible illness for both the sufferer and the people around them. The grandchild's patient love shines through here, along with the ever present hope of a better day tomorrow.

Shirley
27/1/2024 10:11:26 am

Yes, there is always hope for tomorrow.

Cassie
28/1/2024 06:19:35 am

You I didn't realize who you were picturing until you wrote her.U really captured that is often spoken of by family members.

Alyce Clark
1/2/2024 10:44:38 pm

Thank you all for your very kind words.

Deidre
1/2/2024 11:48:28 pm

You had me trying to find who it was. I was suspenseful.

Deidre
2/2/2024 05:41:29 am

That was clever how you had took us through the journey of Alzheimer's.

Jim Bartlett link
2/2/2024 07:02:36 am

"The sun'll come out
Tomorrow
Bet your bottom dollar
That tomorrow
There'll be sun!"

And maybe, just maybe, she'll have a little of that sun in her eyes.
Such an unforgiving disease.
Nicely done, Alyce
Jim


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