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Saturday Love, by Rita Riebel Mitchell

20/2/2021

 
SPORT
She’d stand shivering in the rain, teeth chattering, barely able to hold up the umbrella in the wind. Every game, Mom was there, no matter what, cheering me on as I ran up and down the field.

“Kick it, Benny!” she’d yell.

I remember how, win or lose, she’d tell me I did a great job, even when my only shot of the game was a miss.

“Keep practicing, Benny,” she’d say, handing me a towel. “You’ll get it next time.”

Now it’s my turn to cheer her on as she struggles to walk, talk, and remember my name.
Jim link
20/2/2021 06:59:03 pm

So well done, Rita, it touches the heart.

Jim

Rita
21/2/2021 09:43:15 pm

Thanks for your nice comment, Jim. :-)

Jennifer Duncan
20/2/2021 07:36:08 pm

Well done. The transition from child to parent as our parents age can be sad.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:44:18 pm

Thank you and yes, so sad.

Pamela Kennedy
20/2/2021 07:54:29 pm

Very sweet...touching...

Rita
21/2/2021 09:44:42 pm

Thanks, Pamela.

Marjan sierhuis
20/2/2021 08:16:16 pm

A heart-touching story, Rita.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:45:15 pm

Thank you, Marjan.

Sandra James
20/2/2021 09:42:05 pm

Beautiful, Rita!

Rita
21/2/2021 09:45:50 pm

I appreciate your comment, Sandra. Thanks.

Peggy Gerber
20/2/2021 11:08:43 pm

A wonderful mother raised a wonderful daughter. Beautiful story.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:46:17 pm

Thank you, Peggy.

Sue Clayton
21/2/2021 12:56:19 am

What goes around comes around. An infinity circle binding parent and child.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:48:03 pm

Yes. We should all be ready to take care of our parents as they took care of us. :-) Thanks for reading, Sue.

Sally Arkinstall link
21/2/2021 08:41:23 am

A beautiful love story.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:48:36 pm

Thanks for reading and commenting, Sally.

Jennifer Lai
21/2/2021 02:18:21 pm

Awww! Didn't see the ending coming. Great story.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:49:05 pm

Jennifer, thank you.

Susan F. Reid
21/2/2021 08:39:36 pm

Beautiful story.

Rita
21/2/2021 09:49:34 pm

Thanks, Susan.

Mary Wallace
23/2/2021 05:24:11 am

Lovely story Rita. That's what love is about.


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