He always complained that the handle was too small for his swollen, slug-like fingers, and he would writhe and grimace and deliberately up-end his drink into his blanket, and it was always all her fault. But now the cup was chipped and blood-stained, so she buried that in the garden too.
He always added too much sugar, and the coffee dregs had crystallised in the bottom of the cup. It sat there forgotten on the table, dirty brown spittle still smeared around the rim. It was the only thing left of him in the house.
He always complained that the handle was too small for his swollen, slug-like fingers, and he would writhe and grimace and deliberately up-end his drink into his blanket, and it was always all her fault. But now the cup was chipped and blood-stained, so she buried that in the garden too. 21/1/2022 05:03:05 pm
Whoa!! I did not see that twist coming!
Dee Lorraine
21/1/2022 07:41:54 pm
Oh, I like that, Paul! What a great setup for the last sentence!
Sue Clayton
22/1/2022 12:55:21 am
Murder most sweet.
Sandra James
22/1/2022 02:43:58 am
I love it, Paul! Great images, the slug-like fingers, the crystallised coffee dregs and the blood-stained, chipped mug. Well done.
Cindy Patrick
22/1/2022 10:10:13 pm
great imagery!! Comments are closed.
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