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Tempting Fate, by Mary Wallace

24/7/2020

 
I can feel the cold from the window, but still I refrain from closing the curtains. To block out the raindrop trails and to mute the storm would be to tempt fate.

I sit wrapped in a blanket staring out of the window, waiting for his headlights to turn into our driveway. The news continues in the background; An accident on the A4.

Relief engulfs me. I focus on the yellow glow the headlights create. My brain refuses to register the blue flashing lights.

Krystyna
24/7/2020 04:01:10 pm

Gripping tale, Mary. We often see what we want to see.

marjan sierhuis
24/7/2020 04:27:22 pm

A wonderful example of dissociation, Mary in only 100 words. Well done.

Jim link
24/7/2020 04:52:17 pm

This is really powerful. You feel her wrapped in both the blanket and the worry, and try your hardest to ignore the blue lights even as does she.
Nicely done.
Jim

Pamela Kennedy
24/7/2020 05:03:22 pm

Wow! Good story, Mary.

Paritosh Chandra Dugar
24/7/2020 05:04:33 pm

A mental state uniquely captured. Loved it. Well done, Mary.

Swapan k Banerjee
24/7/2020 05:34:22 pm

Mary, you're a very different person when you write. It always happens with a gifted writer. You've in you the traits of greats like Dostoevsky and Dreiser. May your name spread far and wide ...

Ed N. White
24/7/2020 05:46:56 pm

Graphic suspense. Very well done, Mary.

Sue Clayton
25/7/2020 02:39:35 am

Made my blood run cold, Mary. Gripping piece.

Mary Wallace
25/7/2020 03:16:21 am

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. So glad you liked my story. I am grateful for your encouragement.

Christina Holbrook link
25/7/2020 05:35:33 pm

Wow in just 100 words someone's entire life falls apart! Gripping and (wonderfully) awful!

Mary Wallace
25/7/2020 08:56:39 pm

Thanks Christina.

Sandra James
26/7/2020 05:01:42 am

Very well done, Mary! Most of us can relate to that awful waiting and you've nailed it perfectly. Fortunately, the waiting usually turns out to be ok but for some, not so good :(

Mary Wallace
26/7/2020 06:49:03 am

Thanks Sandra.

Yola Caecenary link
31/7/2020 05:30:32 am

I literally held my breath from the last line of the second paragraph until the end. Liked it, Mary!

Mary Wallace
31/7/2020 10:11:41 am

Thankyou so much.

Sivan Pillai
31/7/2020 09:49:56 am

Beautiful one, Mary.

Mary Wallace
31/7/2020 10:12:06 am

Thank you Silvan


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