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The Critic, by Tom Baldwin

23/2/2024

 
Marnie left the stage after the third curtain call, gracefully accepting the congratulations of the cast. In her dressing-room she collapsed onto the couch and reflected on her performance.

In the first act she had fluffed a line, just a little. Had anyone noticed? She hoped not. In the second act she was fractionally late moving to her mark, and thought the leading man had curled his lip at her error. In the third act she had paused momentarily in a vital speech, but had quickly recovered.

Perhaps tomorrow night she would do better.

Pamela Kennedy
23/2/2024 10:59:24 am

At times we are our own worst critics, but we shouldn't deter ourselves from trying again.Nicely done, Tom.

tony link
23/2/2024 01:22:49 pm

That's why she merits three curtain calls.

Christa Loughrey
23/2/2024 04:00:08 pm

I agree with Tony!

Sandra James
23/2/2024 09:03:38 pm

There's no critic quite like that inner critic! But at least she's looking forward to the next night.

Paul A. Freeman
23/2/2024 09:19:22 pm

I used to write and direct plays. You find yourself being your own worst critic.

Don Tassone link
24/2/2024 01:51:18 pm

Our inner critic can be so harsh. Well done, Tom.

Tom Baldwin
24/2/2024 07:13:46 pm

Thank you all for your comments. Some years ago I had the pleasure of watching two professionals and a director working together. Their attention to detail in perfecting a scene was awe-inspiring.

Cheryl Dahlstrand
24/2/2024 08:04:18 pm

Accurately reflects the challenges inherent in performance. Great use of details that support hard work and dedication to craft!

Tom Baldwin
24/2/2024 09:34:33 pm

Thank you, Cheryl. An expert in any field can make their work look easy. As you say, a lot of hard work goes into the end result.

John O’Keefe
25/2/2024 10:41:02 am

Those of us who participate in community theater can really relate to this piece.

Tom Baldwin
25/2/2024 09:00:20 pm

Thank you, John.

Dee Lorraine
29/2/2024 07:29:37 pm

We can be our worst critics. A lovely story, Tom.

Tom Baldwin
29/2/2024 09:31:03 pm

Thank you, Dee. I've seen mistakes in my published work that no-one else has noticed (I hope).













Alyce
1/3/2024 01:00:41 am

Well done, Tom.

Tom Baldwin
1/3/2024 02:28:20 am

Thank you, Alyce.


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