Tired from her long day in the library, she entered the elevator in her dormitory. Just before the sliding doors closed, a hand burst through the crack and halted the process. She looked up with slight annoyance and then felt pure and simple fear as she registered who stared back.
Nia
14/8/2019 08:38:18 am
Thank you for your kind comment, I'm glad you liked the style!
Brian
8/8/2019 06:24:29 pm
Terrifying story in just 50 words. Great job!
Nia
14/8/2019 08:38:46 am
Thank you very much Brian!
Mary Wallace
9/8/2019 10:21:24 am
This was so gripping. Enough said in such a few words.
Nia
14/8/2019 08:39:42 am
Thank you, much appreciated!
Marjan Sierhuis
9/8/2019 09:41:13 pm
Wow us with more of your great writing! Well done.
Nia
14/8/2019 08:40:02 am
Thank you, I hope to do so! Comments are closed.
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