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The Reason, by Paritosh Chandra Dugar

27/5/2022

10 Comments

 
“I don’t like him.”

“Whom?”

“Your father.”

“But why? He is such a nice man, a good listener, a good speaker, and a good adviser. He is gentle, sober, compassionate, courteous, wise, bold, honest, creative, innovative, and sensitive. He is one of the most respectable persons in society. He has all the qualities of a good human being, yet you say you don’t like him.”

“I agree with you. He is one of the best men on earth. Yet his very qualities make me dislike him.”

But why? What is the reason?”

My father lacks a lot many of them.
10 Comments
Sandra James
27/5/2022 11:22:26 am

Well done, Paritosh! Such a true reflection on real life and I love the way the story progresses until the sad ending.😥

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Pamela Kennedy
27/5/2022 12:08:23 pm

It is interesting how a child sees your spouse quite differently than you do.

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Jim Bartlett link
27/5/2022 04:11:03 pm

A fine line between envy and dislike. Nicely done, Paritosh
Jim

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Candace Arthuria Williams
27/5/2022 07:35:15 pm

I'm glad his daughter loves him. I hope her friend can find a reason to wish her own imperfect dad a "Happy Father's Day."

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Krystyna
27/5/2022 11:15:34 pm

A beautifully told story of conflict emotions so common among us, Paritosh.

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Sue Clayton
28/5/2022 04:34:10 am

A sad reality for some children. I wonder how many of us, no matter how lovely and loved our own parents were, wished at some point in time, that they were more like our friends' mums and dads. The grass is always greener...

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Sivan Pillai
28/5/2022 05:12:03 am

A natural reason to dislike your father. You brought out the envy so nicely, Paritosh.

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Mary Anne mc Enery
28/5/2022 10:24:38 am

Yes, a human reaction well told. I liked it very much,

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Don Tassone link
28/5/2022 12:35:56 pm

A portrait of envy. Well done, Paritosh.

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Paritosh Chandra Dugar
29/5/2022 09:25:51 am

Thank you Sandra, Pamela, Jim, Candace, Krystyna, Sue, Sivan, Mary, and Don for your expert comments.

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