Bobby Warner
24/3/2017 03:25:12 pm
Well written, but it seemed too relentlessly pessimistic. Just my take on it; you've good talent as a writer. And by the way--Who are you? No byline on this one.
A Well Wisher
24/3/2017 04:57:36 pm
Sorry, Bobby, it's me, I forgot to sign it.
Bobby Warner
25/3/2017 03:14:48 am
Since you told a story to comment on reality I suppose pessimism all the way is in order. Glad you didn't "sign" this one. It's good to write anonymously at times--so that the readers can see that your have writing talent regardless of who you are! To paraphrase old Will: "Talent will out." Comments are closed.
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