When he was 16 he seemed to be working steadily and they were certain he was capable of obtaining a good exam result. When he was 17 he seemed to lack self control in private study periods. When he was 18 they made him a prefect and appointed him captain of the cricket team.
Editor's Choice When John was 13 his behaviour was not of the same high standard as his work. When he was 14 they were still waiting for a sense of responsibility to develop. When he was 15 he had an unsettling influence on the rest of the class.
When he was 16 he seemed to be working steadily and they were certain he was capable of obtaining a good exam result. When he was 17 he seemed to lack self control in private study periods. When he was 18 they made him a prefect and appointed him captain of the cricket team.
Scott Holstad
26/5/2023 02:45:33 pm
This is very good! I really like this, Brian.
Cheryl Dahlstrand
27/5/2023 03:02:57 pm
Dee Lorraine
28/5/2023 03:43:10 am
It does happen like that. A good story, Brian. Congratulations!
Tom Baldwin
28/5/2023 06:28:48 am
Most people come good in the end. This describes it well, Brian.
Sue Clayton
29/5/2023 02:37:06 am
Worthy of the Editor's Choice.
Brian Mackinney
30/5/2023 12:55:24 pm
Thank you all for your kind and supportive comments Comments are closed.
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