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The Tunnel, by Don Tassone

27/11/2020

 
We weren’t ready for darkness so overwhelming.

It was unlike anything we’d ever encountered, an abyss illumined only by our headlights, on a road that swerved without signposts. Danger enveloped us. In the shadows, we glimpsed the remains of the unlucky ones.

Would we make it through, or would we be unlucky too? How much longer would this take? Would this tunnel ever end?

It felt as though the walls were closing in on us. We were running low on gas. We were running low on hope.

But then, ahead in the distance, a needlepoint of light pierced the darkness.

Sandra James
27/11/2020 08:40:29 am

Thank goodness for that needlepoint! So true of our lives over the past months. Great story, Don :)

Swapan k Banerjee
27/11/2020 09:06:23 am

Light at the end of the tunnel. Its layered and lends to multiple interpretations. Finely written.

Pamela Kennedy
27/11/2020 12:30:46 pm

Difficult journeys we must travel....I'm glad this one has a happy ending.

peppermint
27/11/2020 01:30:03 pm

The light was a glimmer of hope as long as it wasn't coming from a semi approaching from the other direction!
Shame on me for throwing a damper on hope.

Kathy K.
27/11/2020 03:35:11 pm

I had to laugh, sardonically, I suppose, at the idea of a semi. Once again, Don has given us much to think about. We all feel the relief of the light. Ii hope it is a one-way tunnel.

Bobby Warner
27/11/2020 04:14:13 pm

Suspense, a feeling of impending doom, then the light at theend of the tunnel. Hope springs eternal. You put a lot in 100 words, Don. Fantastic job.

Mary Wallace
27/11/2020 11:04:57 pm

For many the light brings hope, but there are always some who get turned around by the darkness and are lost forever. Thanks Don.

Sue Clayton
28/11/2020 02:34:58 am

On a different tack. I've been on this dark road; encased in a tunnel of black, a beaming headlight funneling wildlife, unlucky creatures that never escaped the wheels. The lights of home appear and I and the creatures are safe for now.

Don Tassone link
28/11/2020 01:03:05 pm

Thank you all for your thoughtful comments.

Bruce Gunther
28/11/2020 01:14:59 pm

Nicely done. Great writing from beginning to end.

Susan F. Reid
28/11/2020 03:39:05 pm

You really built up the tension well.


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