Jack’s wife and daughter waved from the pier as he sailed away. Later, a rogue wave rolled over his craft. He wished that he would live. Afterward, he clung to the capsized boat, wishing that he would see his wife and daughter just one more time. He wished for warmth and soon the sun rose high above the horizon, feeling like a warm hug. Then he saw them, along with the bodies of a hundred others who had been dragged out to sea when the tsunami hit the small group of islands they had known as home. Three wishes granted.
Gordon Lawrie
31/12/2017 10:54:47 pm
Whoa! Dark – careful what you wish for...
Adam Smith
9/1/2018 03:56:53 am
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you get the "dark".
Faseeh
1/1/2018 07:28:23 am
Superb story and congrats for making twice for competition. I read your stories. they were amazing
Adam Smith
9/1/2018 03:57:37 am
Thank you so much for the compliment, and for reading through my stories. Your time and opinion is very much appreciated. Sincerely, Adam Comments are closed.
|
"Classic"
|
|
– just to check she's safe & well –click the button below.
Rules
Archives
August 2022
July 2022
June 2022
May 2022
April 2022
March 2022
February 2022
January 2022
December 2021
November 2021
October 2021
September 2021
August 2021
July 2021
June 2021
May 2021
April 2021
March 2021
February 2021
January 2021
December 2020
November 2020
October 2020
September 2020
August 2020
July 2020
June 2020
May 2020
April 2020
March 2020
February 2020
January 2020
December 2019
November 2019
October 2019
September 2019
August 2019
July 2019
June 2019
May 2019
April 2019
March 2019
February 2019
January 2019
December 2018
November 2018
October 2018
September 2018
August 2018
July 2018
June 2018
May 2018
April 2018
March 2018
February 2018
January 2018
December 2017
November 2017
October 2017
September 2017
August 2017
July 2017
June 2017
May 2017
April 2017
March 2017
February 2017
January 2017
December 2016
November 2016
October 2016
September 2016
August 2016
July 2016
June 2016
May 2016
April 2016
March 2016
February 2016
January 2016
December 2015
November 2015
October 2015
September 2015
August 2015
July 2015
June 2015
May 2015
April 2015
March 2015
February 2015
January 2015
December 2014
November 2014
October 2014
September 2014
August 2014
July 2014
June 2014
May 2014
April 2014
March 2014
February 2014
January 2014
December 2013
November 2013
October 2013
September 2013
December 2012