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What Went Before, by Mimi Grouse

20/1/2023

23 Comments

 
Editor's Choice
When the Bakers moved into their new house, they found an odd plant growing beneath the bedroom window. It had smooth, round leaves and small, black flowers which emitted a bitter, pungent odour.

I'm going to dig it up," decided Mr Baker, to his wife's satisfaction.

The ground was soft and Mr Baker soon reached the roots. He stopped when his spade grazed rotting wooden planks. The police were called, the area cordoned off, and the Bakers watched in horror as a makeshift coffin was exhumed.
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Especially shocking, everyone concurred, was the wooden stake protruding from the uncorrupted cadaver's chest.
23 Comments
Pamela Kennedy
20/1/2023 08:13:29 am

What a surprise!

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Mimi Grouse
20/1/2023 09:02:26 am

Thank you, Pamela.

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Allison Symes link
20/1/2023 09:26:59 am

Wow! Cracking story and fabulous ending. Well done.

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Mimi Grouse
20/1/2023 09:32:48 am

Thank you, Allison.

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Mary Anne mc Enery
20/1/2023 10:55:00 am

Left me wanting to hide under the bed!

When Mr .Baker started digging I got suspicious.

Well dine ,Mimi

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Mimi Grouse
20/1/2023 11:11:09 am

Ooh, but are you sure it's safe under the bed...?
Thank you, Mary Anne.

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Editor
20/1/2023 01:13:06 pm

What's that coming up between the floorboards under the bed???

Jim Bartlett link
20/1/2023 03:50:56 pm

Oh, my! Great story and well deserving of the Editor's Choice!
Jim

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Mimi Grouse
20/1/2023 04:01:11 pm

Thank you, Jim.

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Faye Rapoport DesPres link
20/1/2023 06:14:40 pm

What a fun story!

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Mimi Grouse
20/1/2023 06:32:53 pm

Thank you, Faye.

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Dee Lorraine
20/1/2023 10:21:08 pm

I love the nonchalant approach, and especially the last sentence! Congratulations, Mimi!

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Mimi Grouse
21/1/2023 05:24:17 am

Thank you, Dee.

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Ariana Hagen
20/1/2023 10:23:10 pm

What a twist! It is so hard to create mystery in just 100 words, and you managed it fantastically

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Mimi Grouse
21/1/2023 05:25:10 am

Thank you, Ariana.

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Tom Baldwin
21/1/2023 02:58:14 am

Well done, Mimi. I'll never dig my garden again!

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Mimi Grouse
21/1/2023 05:26:29 am

Dig with caution...
Thank you, Tom.

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Padmini
21/1/2023 11:54:38 am

Well-written mystery in just 100 words

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Mimi Grouse
21/1/2023 12:34:33 pm

Thank you, Padmini.

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Sue Clayton
22/1/2023 04:08:00 am

The vampire has just been biding his time. Beware all you humans that disturbed his resting place. Now he will rise.

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Mimi Grouse
22/1/2023 05:09:17 am

Hehe. There's more to this story than we think...
Thank you, Sue.

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Marjan Sierhuis
23/1/2023 10:53:05 pm

This story begs for a sequel.

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Mimi Grouse
24/1/2023 05:00:31 am

Thank you, Marjan.

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