Inside, she doesn’t flick on a light—there are no surprises here—says hello to her cat, and tosses her bag onto the counter. Crossing to the mirror by the bed she stares at her reflection and wonders, When is that moment when dreams become memories?
With a single canvas tote draped over her arm, the woman climbs the two flights of stairs to her apartment. Despite the old walking stick and her older bones, she is still healthy, still strong. The stairs are nothing for her, but she climbs carefully anyway, as anyone who lives alone learns to do.
Inside, she doesn’t flick on a light—there are no surprises here—says hello to her cat, and tosses her bag onto the counter. Crossing to the mirror by the bed she stares at her reflection and wonders, When is that moment when dreams become memories?
Lynn Messing
24/9/2021 07:17:07 pm
I am extremely impressed by how open your story is to reader interpretation. I can see this story as being extremely cheerful or terribly depressing, depending on the answer to that question. My cheerful answer is, "When the dreams have been realized." My depressing answer is, "When one gives up on both dreaming and life. Your story is written in such a way that either answer could be plausible.
Sue Clayton
25/9/2021 03:30:33 am
I can't add any more to Lynn's incisive, well said comment. A truly enjoyable piece of FFF. Comments are closed.
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